In writing we wrote about a quite unusual Monday morning. Our success criteria was our writing needed an attention grabbing start to hook the reader, language features such as similes and alliteration were to be used and most importantly our writing needed to be entertaining.
Here are some examples that ticked all those boxes. Enjoy
Here are some examples that ticked all those boxes. Enjoy
Very entertaining writing here guys - You really grabbed my attention from the first few lines. Some excellent creative thinking too the idea of a melon funeral and a UFW cracked me up boys. This standard of writing really sets the benchmark high!
ReplyDeleteGreat job. I liked how Caleb's was very entertaining
ReplyDeleteWow very impressive pieces here guys.
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic learning experience! Well done Joshua, your writing held my attention right from the first line and then built suspense through the whole paragraph.
ReplyDeleteGood job Caleb I like how you said "Bought on a Sunday Killed on a Monday" it was really entertaining.
ReplyDeleteAwesome I wish I wish I could be there to see the watermelon go kaboom!
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